This one's from the Chicago Tribune. It's shot nicely, but I can't decide how I feel about it on the whole. I know I don't like the way the segments are broken up by statistics that scream at you in big, bold caps. There's one spot at about 2:40 where the woman's child's voice comes in and says something indistinguishable that I would have kept at a lower volume since it doesn't appear to be of importance.
What do you guys think? Is the broad focus of this piece appropriate for what they seem to be trying to do, which is raise some awareness of the problem of poverty in the area? Or should this have been narrowed down to one or two folks who could tell the story in a more personal way?
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